Mom, wishing if i were your works!

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The legendary John Lennon of The Beatles has been touching millions of hearts with his song Mother
“Mother, you had me but I never had you,
I wanted you but you didn't want me,
So I got to tell you,
Goodbye, goodbye…”

Of course we need to work to provide our loved ones a comfortable life. However, parenting is a lot more than just giving your baby a shelter, some clothing or food. Parenting is loving your baby each and every day. Spend time to play, to laugh and cry with them. Don’t wait until it’s too late!

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brandname55, madad, albu
  1. brandname55
    brandname55 18-01-2011, 01:52 AM
    I love concept but not a good way of expressing.:))
  2. madad
    madad 24-10-2010, 12:32 AM
    There are many things to fix here.
    -First, it's not clean. I still can see the girl is not belong to the image, especially the bottom part.
    -Second, she's a little bit too young.
    -Headline shouldn't be next to the logo. That's the tagline's place.
    -The information is too small to read.
    -The shadows are weird.
    -Too much space on the top. The headline could be there.
    -Hmmm, the tricky thing here is the boy's looking straight to the viewer. He should have looked straight to his mom because the headline represents what he's thinking at the moment. Or you can change the headline if you want to keep the image, which I would prefer.
  3. albu
    albu 10-10-2010, 10:45 PM
    I love my baby...